Poppy's Narrative

THE PIE EATERS

By Poppy

Once upon a time there was a beautiful little girl with her favourite pink and blue top and black skirt. The girl was called Jacky and she had a twin sister called Corbina they both sparkled like a star sparkling in the sky. 

“La La La La La’’ they sang happily. They both loved playing with their dolls.

Their Grandma  was old and wrinkly with gray hair and a pink dress. She was called Reubina. She liked singing One Direction when she made her pies. 

One day she made a strawberry pie for the party that she was going to. She put the cake on the table to let it cool down. Jacky and Corbina  came into the kitchen and snuck the strawberry pie until there was none left. Reubina  came in and screamed  “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH my pie is gone and I’ll have to make another one!” This time I’ll make a poisonous one so they cant stop dancing. So Reubina made a poisonous pie and left it to cool down.

Then Corbina and Jacky came in and ate the pie and suddenly started dancing nonstop.

Reubina came in and danced around, yelling “I caught the thieves! I caught the thieves, I caught the thieves!”

Ruebina ordered “Since you ate all the pies you will do the dishes now. While I go to the party.

“Not fair!” Corbina and Jacky cried still dancing.

“It is fair.” said Ruebina. “See you later Corbina and Jacky.” said Ruebina as she walked out the door with her pie carefully balanced on her hand.  From that day on Jacky and Corbina never stole a pie again. They had learnt their lesson.