A couple of weeks ago I performed as Young Cinderella in the Royal New Zealand Ballet. In writing we have been learning to "show the reader" instead of telling the reader so I tried to add interesting adjectives and verbs into my writing. I published my piece using Puppet Pals.
By Jorja
Very clever!!! You did a great job!
ReplyDeleteAwesome, what a great experience!
ReplyDeleteI like how you changed your voice
ReplyDeleteWell done Jorja! I like how you twisted your body and changed backgrounds. Keep up with the great work!
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