Our Group Story
The hairy, stinky giants were smashing fancy houses in the small village, because they were very angry. The brave villagers had fired enormous catapults at then and one had his brown eyes taken out.
The giants ran over top of the wooden houses and they were flattened. The terrified villagers ran to some dark caves nearby for safety.
When the giants went to the biggest house, they stamped loudly on it, but they didn't see the massive steel trap hidden underneath the mat in the lounge.
They fell through it and landed on millions of dangerous red-black scorpions that the tough and clever villagers had put in it.
The giants were poisoned. They died quickly and painfully. The happy villagers returned to their homes, and decided to leave the dead giants t rot in the muddy pit.
After a while the giants rotting bodies started to smell revolting, so the disgusted villagers moved away, by boat and plane, to Australia, and built a 41 story tower apartment by the beach.
They relaxed and sunbathed for the rest of their lives in the beautiful sun.
Written by Ashleigh, James, Brayden (Rm2) and Clayton (Rm2).
With the support and guidance of Mrs H :)
WOW! We all think you have written a great story. We like the way you have used a lot of cool adjectives and added detail to your story to make it interesting. Well done, we are proud of you.
ReplyDeleteMrs B and Room Five :)
Ashleigh and James I really like the story that your group has written above. You have used some great describing words. Well done.
ReplyDeleteTo all of the other people in Room 5, I have been looking at other classes blogs and I have been really impressed with your thoughtful comments. Good work
Hi Room 5,
ReplyDeleteMrs Cowan and Miss McGinnis have been checking out your awesome story about the Giants. I think that this story will be a very good one to show Room 3 and 2 children how adjectives make a piece of writing better.
Ka pai to mahi!
hi room 5
ReplyDeletethats an awesome story
well done James and Ashleigh
You are great writers
kai pai
Anna