Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Bradley's Story


The Bad Robber
By Bradley Whitaker


One night a robber struck the Bank and again at the Gold Store. Lastly the Jeweler shop, where Police almost caught him. The robber just kept stealing and stealing until he came to the Egyptian Shop.   

Just as he snuck in a ninja jumped off the roof and stopped the robber! The ninja called the Police and they took the robber to jail for 2,000 years.

Paige's Narrative


THE ROBBER SHOP!
By Paige Taylor

One day a man came to Australia and was trying to find a home. His name was Johnny. Johnny had blue eyes red hair and he was a bad man.

He opened a shop called THE ROBBER SHOP. Everyone came running in when they heard the name of the shop.

Johnny was running out of things for his shop so he started to steal expensive items from people’s houses. Soon the shop was full of things.
That night when Johnny went home he forgot to lock the door to the shop. Then someone broke in and stole everything.
That morning Johnny found out he was robbed and was so disappointed when he saw stuff was gone. So Johnny rang the police.

However they already knew who the robber was! The police said “you are the robber your under arrest! You got so addicted to stealing that you robbed you own shop!” The robber was handcuffed and got put in jail for 2 years. After the two years in jail he started to behave and lived happily ever after.      

Jessica's Narrative


The Princess
By Jessica Glover

Once upon a silly time there was a princess called Renei. She was nice to everybody and very beautiful. Renei had long curly blond hair that everybody loved. She was very talented because she was an aerobics champion.

There was an evil witch who lived in the palace. She ordered the guard to lock Renei in the dungeon because she hated her and wanted to be Queen.
Instead the guard looked after Princess Renei because her Dad was dead and he felt like he should protect her.

The very very very evil witch was furious when she heard that the guard had disobeyed her.

So when Renei was on a lovely holiday in China the witch got ready for her plan.

When the princess stepped into the castle CRASH! BANG! the princess was gone but Renei’s ring fell off her finger.

When  the guard found out that Renei  was gone he was sad. Then the guard found her ring and Linsday found Renei hiding in the dungeon. They all lived silly ever after.