Tuesday, July 17, 2012

Paige's Narrative


THE ROBBER SHOP!
By Paige Taylor

One day a man came to Australia and was trying to find a home. His name was Johnny. Johnny had blue eyes red hair and he was a bad man.

He opened a shop called THE ROBBER SHOP. Everyone came running in when they heard the name of the shop.

Johnny was running out of things for his shop so he started to steal expensive items from people’s houses. Soon the shop was full of things.
That night when Johnny went home he forgot to lock the door to the shop. Then someone broke in and stole everything.
That morning Johnny found out he was robbed and was so disappointed when he saw stuff was gone. So Johnny rang the police.

However they already knew who the robber was! The police said “you are the robber your under arrest! You got so addicted to stealing that you robbed you own shop!” The robber was handcuffed and got put in jail for 2 years. After the two years in jail he started to behave and lived happily ever after.      

2 comments:

  1. Great story Paige. I bet Johnny felt devastated when he realised his own shop had been robbed. A good lesson to him.

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  2. Paige I really enjoyed the twist in your plot at the end. Who would have guessed that Johnny would steal from his own shop? Great to see your work on the blog.

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