Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Jamie's Olympic Poem


Olympic 2012
The most amazing
Time for me.
Cameras flashing.
Eyes on me.
I’m running
With the
Olympic
Torch
I don’t
Want to trip
Over
on the
Track.
Nervousness
Flowing
Through my
Body.
Billions
Of people
Watching me.
Cheering, yelling,
Clapping and whistling.
Just for me.
I want to do my best.
Start the Olympics!
By Jamie 

4 comments:

  1. This is a really great poem Jamie! I love the way it is set out, it really looks like an Olympic Torch. Well done.

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  2. I love the way that they are set out.You should make a newsletter and share it with the whole school.

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  3. lots of descriptive words int his poem good job.
    From tara

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  4. Great poem Jamie.

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